This thread is really making me lmao. But again good job dude. Some things I noticed.
1) You sure you want to use your real name and image? Or is that fake?
2) Would it be hard to put a pause/play button like you did with the first chapter?
3) Would it be possible to dumb down going to the eq2 service plugin location, i.e. going through the whole actual thread progression to the forum. I know you would expect most people to find, but you have the test forum and confirmed forum. Some people do get confused.
4) I don't know if you are going to do a troubleshooting portion or not, but the registration screen I think is the biggest issue. I'm still having problems with it myself - and I think it would help, even if you have another chapter just for troubleshooting.
5) Not sure how many chapters you have, but if you can follow the KISS principal: Keep It Simple Stupid (not saying you are). Making it more dumbed down is actually better in the long run.
Really good job. Hope they give you big bucks.