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 december submission : General Discussion
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| Posted: December 21st, 2006, 9:20 am
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stpain
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WEll this is the first I made... More to follow up... and will choose at the end which one I put up as official =D
Advanced critique is appreciated =D
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| Posted: December 25th, 2006, 5:32 am
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stpain
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New one.. Tell me which one you like best.. and what to improve on it =D
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| Posted: December 25th, 2006, 5:52 am
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stpain
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Another one =D... I will later post a version with renders in it =D
Well same as the other 2 plz give good comments on how to improve them
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| Posted: December 25th, 2006, 5:46 pm
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ekreloff
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I like them alot, i think if u screwed around with the colors you could make them cooler.
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| Posted: December 26th, 2006, 2:14 am
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stpain
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So in what needs more coloring? And what colors you think are nice? I tried to stick mostly with blue.. as that was the common color of TU  Everywhere blue =D
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| Posted: December 26th, 2006, 10:00 am
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kourath
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my fav is 3-2, everything just seems to tie in nicely. the grey in the text in 3 just really isnt doing it for me. #2 is really nice color-wise, but its lacking some solidity geometrically IMO. #1 has something to it, it needs a little more color.
nice work! and im looking forward to seeing what you come up with next. ive seen what youve done in the past ( http://stpain.deviantart.com/gallery/ ), and you definantly have the potential to win.
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| Posted: December 26th, 2006, 12:30 pm
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stpain
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I feel honored to hear that =D
And as the admins and mods are giving feedback either... i hope to see some today or tommorow, So I Can see a little bit how the admins wane see it...
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| Posted: December 26th, 2006, 1:34 pm
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stpain
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Ah well here is a new one =D The text: "gaming-community" is probaly to be removed... Dont like it actually =D
I have some new idea's Will create and post them tonight or tommorow =D
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| Posted: December 26th, 2006, 5:53 pm
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kourath
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really liked your latest design at first glance. studied it for a few minutes and decided that the text is a little to close to the red ball (looks kind of scrunched IMO), and that the red ball had a little to much attention of the overall design. it looked like the shapes were to dark, and the text was a little to light, causing the attention thingy. dont get my wrong, i really like your new design, simple and sweet, just, trying to give some constructive criticism, since no one else is. keep trying, looking forward to seeing what you post next.
edit: btw, i actually kind of like the "gaming community" there, it pulls everything in and closes it off. XD not sure how to word it.
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| Posted: December 27th, 2006, 2:49 am
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stpain
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What is a staple, rabid?
And kourath thanks for your really helpfull reply =D I would defiantly add the improvements you said... And post it up later
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| Posted: December 27th, 2006, 7:51 am
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rabidsoccerball
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Something you need, possibly to bring everything together.
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| Posted: December 27th, 2006, 11:15 am
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stpain
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Oh k =D.. You mean something like a eye catcher =D I get it ;D
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| Posted: December 29th, 2006, 11:22 am
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lethal
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| Posted: December 30th, 2006, 5:24 am
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stpain
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Well thanks lethal =D...
@kourath : I updated it abit with the comments you gave. What do you think of it now?
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| Posted: December 30th, 2006, 6:48 pm
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kourath
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VERY nice. excellent work.
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december submission : General Discussion
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